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Jump Ultimate Stars: Star World

Chaos, Randomness, the hellish White Void, clones, and things that are... well, illegal in the real world i think... Love, Betrayal, Hellfire Missles, and Special Effects made exclusively in MS Paint. Profile (this thing) updates depending on when the story actually changes... Contains humor, manga references, stupidly animated violence because paint sucks for that kind of thing, random comments by the author, and more of that... and only 4 sprites sets not from the JUS game were used... and were harmed too... (godzilla, Kirby, Kirbehchu, and Advanced wars units) Actually, I won't lie... sprites WERE harmed in the making of this... some of which were for my personal amusment... which many found funny too...


Ep 1 Ch 1: It All Begins

April 22nd, 2007, 4:24 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
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Strykor, April 22nd, 2007, 4:50 pm

Well, as this is the first comic, I'll have to wait and see on the jokes and storylines. Doesn't mean I'm going to let you off without goine over some of the technicals. First off, the frame. Straighten out the lines and make each box universal in size. It will look a lot better. Also, if you're going to make a six-panel comic, stack them in a 3-panel length by 2-panel height. What you have now stretches out too far. Second is backgrounds. I'm not one to talk, since I use a fairly simple background too, but I think it would look a lot better with the backgrounds found here: http://www.spriters-resource.com/other/other/jump/
I know they're from Jump Super Stars, but I believe they'll work for you. Okay, time to let someone else have some fun.

Leg, April 22nd, 2007, 8:07 pm

Yeahhhh... Well this was the first one... it was kinda big... Ive made about 17 so far... around number 13 or so i use an actual background. ^.^ thats about when I start to make is 3X2 anyway thanks for the comment

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